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13 June 2005 @ 04:47 pm
Finally somebody said it  
This story is really suspenseful, but its completely plotless and really confusing. It would be really good if u rewrote it with the same idea, preferably with more than 3 hours of sleep.

-a reviewer at ff.net about Space Pirates

I don't agree on the rewriting part, but plotless and suspense? Hell, yes!

It's the second best thing I've read so far today. What made my day was digging up some old EFC fic. You just have to love fight scenes with whacky dialogue like this:

Doors stared in amazement as the Taelon moved with lightening speed to the corner of the lift, so blocking the exit doors. "You fool! We are going to be blown sky high!"

"I do not fear death, and I will have the honor of taking you with me!" Zo'or sneered. "Then we will ride the wave to oblivion together!" Doors retorted.

They stood glaring at one another until the explosion forced them both to impact with the opposite side of the lift.


Which is from This is who I am
 
 
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~eledhwenlin on June 13th, 2005 03:44 pm (UTC)
Whacky dialogue is the best. :)
I'm Jack Sparrow's jar of dirt. [Don't touch me!]: Sweet dreamsninnui on June 13th, 2005 07:18 pm (UTC)
so you found what you where searching for.. will go now and read Space Pirates for myself.. :) thanks for the links!!