Illman (illman) wrote,

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Finally somebody said it

This story is really suspenseful, but its completely plotless and really confusing. It would be really good if u rewrote it with the same idea, preferably with more than 3 hours of sleep.

-a reviewer at about Space Pirates

I don't agree on the rewriting part, but plotless and suspense? Hell, yes!

It's the second best thing I've read so far today. What made my day was digging up some old EFC fic. You just have to love fight scenes with whacky dialogue like this:

Doors stared in amazement as the Taelon moved with lightening speed to the corner of the lift, so blocking the exit doors. "You fool! We are going to be blown sky high!"

"I do not fear death, and I will have the honor of taking you with me!" Zo'or sneered. "Then we will ride the wave to oblivion together!" Doors retorted.

They stood glaring at one another until the explosion forced them both to impact with the opposite side of the lift.

Which is from This is who I am

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